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Aug 18, 2023
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week August 13th to August 18th 2023.
Where now?
Draw upon your memories,
Let them dance within your mind.
For you are the guardian of these treasures,
Your loved one has left behind
About This Poem
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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neopoet
1 year 11 months ago
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Geezer
1 year 11 months ago
The loved ones...
who have left me, have also left me as guardians of the treasured memories, ones that become all the more valuable, for when I am no longer here to remember them, they will pass away with me. I like this simple sort of rhyme that calls for the guarding of such memories. It makes for pleasant thoughts. ~ Geezer.
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WealdenCelebrant
1 year 11 months ago
Thank you
Thank you Geezer, I wrote that after my dad passed away - I was lucky that he spoke openly of his life, his likes (and dislikes!).
But he has left me with wonderful memories.