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Nov 07, 2022
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Where the vine has grown
Grimly grown
Into the
youthful
yearnings
towards
being alone.
Within this
wistful world
woefully willing
to wear itself down.
In order to be
branded as
something of
your own .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
2 years 8 months ago
Hellow Edward
First time to meet so hello.
This has a very sad feeling to it. I am sorry if this has something to do with your own life. I ery uch like the internal rhymes as well as the final ones.
Sort and yet rich with detailed feelings.
Thank you for sharing
Edward nigma
2 years 8 months ago
Thank you
My inspiration was this
https://youtu.be/I09Ub84AUkg