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Which am I...~~~By Lovedly please me

Doctor Jekyll~~~ Mr Hyde
two in one body reside
inside
one for day as doc
the other for night
knock knock

believe me I am the real
loved
then
lovedone
then
lovedly
then
Rosy me

Now I'm done
Someone help me
who am I can you tell me
a sole imagery in eternity
or infinity
least of all in oblivion

if this poem gets posted
as from Lovedly
I am then the real one
Loved /Lovedly
ROSE flower one

Some one resolve
the mystery for me .

Some think I am young
others feel I need now
to RIP

what is your opinion
will you tell me
Paul Gee or Stan
anyone

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This poem is from Lovedly real one

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ETERNITY AND INFINITY

Favorite Poets: About me: , ''A rose bud also withers away, but rarely dies as in library books, they after life stay so would Lovedly, may...'', once Loved, now Lovedly, PERIOD OVER 15 YEARS , may be the longest, ''unknown poet'', This account is a duplicate account of lovedly please search lovedly to read this user's poetry.

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Comments

Triskelion

Triskelion

4 years ago

I am not

sure who you are, but your riddle based poem is really refreshing.

Thomas

Geezer

Geezer

4 years ago

A mistake...

The comment was for someone else. For you, the name is not important, it is the man behind the scene! ~ Geez.
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Ray Whitaker

Ray Whitaker

4 years ago

So like Lovedly

So much. Are we sure he didn’t ghostwrite this?

The piece remiinds me of “Doctor Jimmy and Mr Jim” and some the duality in life.

R

ROSYME

4 years ago

Thanks Mark

kindness always and ever pays
there's problem these days