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Jun 02, 2016
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whippowhirl
in the will the malestrom knows
of candlelight progression
in ceremony forest sheild
the train has ground to its
stop steaming
simmering Its lamps like
fate shines in the mist
one step two
into the deep
though the fear of
chaos is unpleasant
a taste
there is no handicap
of haste
we are mere
matter
existing
sending and
recieving
the terror
and the beauty
of the bane
and wonderful
an adventure
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
brittle light
9 years 1 month ago
I'm always dismayed by those
I'm always dismayed by those who wish for perfect equanimity...sounds boring to me; an adventure that never is adventurous!
I hope I got the gist, I like your words even if not.
Esker
9 years 1 month ago
dutiful passion
destination in creation....cheap resilence that survives memory!
thank U! its basic often the passage....
mand
9 years 1 month ago
Hi Esker
Always love your imagery - this is no exception. Life is like a mixture of beauty and beast.
Thought provoking poems :)
Love Mand xxx
Esker
9 years 1 month ago
oh my....beastly beauty...sometimes the best
although safe sate is fine! danger is the spice for wild tastes!
L'image In nation leagues of dream...
thank u!
jane210660
9 years 1 month ago
To me a poem of
To me a poem of juxtapositions.
Just like life.
I like the imagery in this. Jx
Esker
9 years 1 month ago
contrast
I shall forever live outside the box
thank U!
jane210660
9 years 1 month ago
It's a good job some of us do
It's a good job some of us do, the world would be a boring place if we all lived within the same set perimeters. Jxx