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Sep 28, 2019
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Whisper In A Dream
let out at its scene
live to what is free
a paradox king
whisper in a dream
whisper in a scene
crowd an allergic king
pay attention floating scene
commercial to its fame
let go of its tremendous charm
we fight to let go
the beach toward you
love means more to me
filled out through a quaint mystery
love has it's turn
another page is worn
high a zipper no it all
better pace at a nearby mall
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
chevyvent
5 years 9 months ago
Turn the joke into a favor
love each moment with a tongue filled tide;
Relax as we encounter the moment we depend
ROSYME
5 years 9 months ago
lovely imagery
if you want to enjoy
stay on the beech
till sun the far horizon
does reach
he will beseech