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WHISPERING WOODS

WHISPERING WOODS

Perhaps the rustling leaves are telling the tree’s tale
Whispering, such that only those listening may hear
Only when it is in tune, may the message be clear
Yet unless easily understood, it will be of little avail

The breeze is a medium, but other connections too
To share, an underground root network also serves
It’s communication via a kind of complex of nerves
No myths or stories, as all that’s shared will be true

Summer is a competition for sunlight, as if in a duel
In autumn it is time for the farewell to falling leaves
Yet the first snow of winter is as an axe that cleaves
But next spring, it’s the buzz of growth and renewal

The style of the telling is not random, but planned
Facts the trees near and far, eventually get to know
But its sending and receipt is effective, even if slow
Nature’s sagas few of us will ever get to understand

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: w,yorks, UK, GBR

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

9 months ago

hello,

This line seems rough:

Only when only in tune, may the message be clear.
I loved the rest of this poem. my favorite lines are:

The style of the telling is not random, but planned
Facts the trees near and far, eventually get to know
But its sending and receipt is effective, even if slow
Nature’s sagas few of us will ever get to understand

*hugs, Cat

Sen99

Sen99

9 months ago

Hello Twizzle

An enjoyable read, the form ABBA is kept throughout, but I agree with Cat some forced rhymes to fit the rhyme scheme, still the woods are alive with this poem. Thanks for share.

Rula

Rula

8 months 3 weeks ago

Twizzle

This is absolutely beautiful. The connection among the natural elements is very true. I wish if we as humans have the same.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes.