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Apr 12, 2022
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WHISTLING TRAIN
Keeps awaking all
in our village
again and again
then they say
don't make children
it's 3 a.m.
tell them all what to do
twiddle thumbs
what fun
no pun
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 3 months ago
I totally agree...
what do you do, while waiting to go back to sleep?
I guess tiring oneself out in order to get back to sleep in the easiest way!
And so much fun! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
hello dear,
when I can't sleep I meditate and use self-hypnosis. it helps me greatly!
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
TWO GOOD FRIENDS
Each one for oneself
depends on age and rage
lol we all
must