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Leslie

Dec 03, 2024 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

White Wedding!

Noble and enchanting,
there's a highland wedding!
Just outside of Glasgow
by the river Clyde.
There upon the heather
An elopement taking place.
There the beauty Abigail
takes Nathan by the hand.
Wanders off the byway
pipers playing softly.
White wedding is at hand.
Mist is rising slowly,
up off of the ground.
Wedding vows exchanged,
All the clan is dancing
Nathan kisses his new bride
Walks into the promised land!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: a descriptive poem about my daughter and her husband.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Ogden, Utah, USA

Favorite Poets: Jon Anderson, Jon Ondrasik, Donald Fagen, Sting, Eric Bloom , and all of the poets at neo.

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7 months 1 week ago

White Wedding!

Hello, John,
Congratulations on your daughter's wedding! Noble and enchanting, indeed! Thank you for sharing such an endearing poem.
L

7 months 1 week ago

L

THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING YOU'RE THE ONLY ONES WHO HAS HERE ON THIS SITE.

7 months 1 week ago

I liked this

Keep writing I'm busy most of the time so I don't see many poems

7 months 1 week ago

JOKER FACE 82

I'M GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT AND THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING

7 months 1 week ago

JOKER FACE 82

I'M GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT AND THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING