Who came to dinner?

He wanted some friends round for dinner
Nothing seemed stranger or simpler
I agree, unaware
Of the quaint pair
Who were coming

A handsome black man,
an Intelligent, woman
Both part of his work
No agenda lurked
For their coming

What he didn't let on
Was what he had done
with the man and also the other
who both were his lovers
That were coming

Where was he as I was occupied
Doing the roast,what did he try,
What sick sense led them both to be there
The male and the female,did he stroke her hair
When he was coming

To dinner?

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Retrospect of who were our party guests over the years.i believe most fitted this category. Swinging London!

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Uk south east London

Favorite Poets: Wilde, Keats, Shakespeare, Benjamin Zephaniah , Browning Elizabeth Barrett and Robert, Turkish poetry, rudyard Kipling, arctic monkey song lyrics, Pam Ayres, Donne, Beatles Simon and Garfunkel song lyrics

Comments

loved

12 years 6 months ago

was he

a dual personality //
GEMINI... SAGGY ..PISCEAN... OR VIRGO

such folks play Dr Jekyl and Mr Hyde
the way they go
they themselves don't know ...

he may be gay with the black one
as he must be stronger....
but
with the woman he must be boasting
of a staying power longer
hope I'm wrong
anyway this guy makes you strong
next time ask him upfront
which door
near or rear??

sad for your experiences young gal
hope you will bear
the stresses you have

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

Thank you

Loved your reply!

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

Interesting. Does it go with star sign?

He was Leo

loved

12 years 6 months ago

Leos are like lions

perhaps you may not know
lions mate every two minutes
100 times a day
some human beings want to so behave
but leo - cuspy could be Virgo
check back if you may
you could pm
if secret you want to stay

i am a scientist by the way
studying the Human Mind...