Who? (The Other Me)

Profound words from a very talented deep thinker. Incredibly thought provoking.

Good to read your work again.

Love Mand xxxxxx

I find I know the source of this thought-travel
into the known unknown;
and with it you intrigue the people who know not the unknown
as you do,
dreaming in your daytime
awake to write this piece of magic
to entertain our minds.

Dear judyanne so glad to see your poetry again,
love from me, annanya.

conscience is like a bedfellow
never leaves us alone for a while
each unseen act or even a thought
never escapes his might...

i enjoyed the write and the theme...

in fact i am working on a similar theme..not just ready with it as yet...

One dares not try to speed through this thought provoker...............stan

It's good to see new writing from you.
This is very good, until the last stanza, where the cadence breaks down, for me. Particularly the 2nd line, where the cadence simply doesn't fit, imo. Up until then the flow is excellent, and the meaning and implications profound. I think you should re-work the last stanza, to fit the rest of the poem in pace and flow.

contact with our higher selves, as you say, should be everyone's goal. Unfortunately, that is not always the case. I found this extremely interesting, and thought provoking. Nice to see a new write from you. ~ Gee

Dearest Judy, my favourite lines are

Once re-united with self-knowledge I lack,
all experience at my fingertips to take,
I’ll hear and see what wonders, I wonder,
when both the dreamed and the dreamer awake.

These lines mean a lot to me...thanks a lot.
Regards
Ayaz

wow, so many have commented already and I must agree, it is thought provoking and deep.
my favorite line:
I’m costumed in my stardust machine.
you have no idea how many images this evokes, this line is a true inspiration, a statement, a vision...
I simply adore the rhythm of the last two lines, the occasional staccato woven into a soft melody. beautiful and enticing.
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