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Mar 03, 2012
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WHORE OF MINAIS GERAIS
puta de ruas
Minais Gerais
sombra sem lua
movendo-se em vôo
o é que faiz?
quem saberá noite
traição
da sua mordida,
puta de ruas
Minais Gerais
Whore of streets
Minais Gerais
moonless night
shadow moving
in flight
who will know
tonight
the sting
of your treacherous
bite.
Whore of streets
Minais Gerais
Minais Gerais a province north of Rio
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
emogothgirl
13 years 4 months ago
hmmm
interesting. i kinda like the different languages.
always,
mag
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
I need to wrte these short
I need to wrte these short pOems in Brazilian Portuguese first. A great deal is exp;ressed in few words and the syntax is more "liberal":)
Nordic cloud
13 years 4 months ago
A short bite of a poem this
A short bite of a poem this one, short and sharp
I enjoyed it like a savoury sandwich, for a snack.
The only thing I put in subconsciously was - of - the streets.
Love Anni
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
ellipsis.
ellipsis.
Esker
13 years 4 months ago
travel
in Quebec city the little home restaurant that most tourists wouldnt venture into
we dined
and Jamaica the little grocery store across the busy tourist road
outside the compound with its broken glass topped walls
we purchased a flat of Sweet soda pop that was a weeks wages
and shared with our man about town that catered information
and brought trade to us
I have never been to Pompei or Rio but would be mesmerized
by the different heartbeat of culture and social trangressions
the layouts of the towns and air
One could just as easily write of the city with its layers and
pocket societys at night or in the day swaying with the
thicket of termini activities
Thank You Joe!
wesley snow
13 years 4 months ago
This is sharp, friend.
Short and accusatory. wesley
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
Thanks Wes and Seven--more to
Thanks Wes and Seven--more to come aways write only what I know
joe