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Feb 14, 2011
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Why Restrict
Your love on a Valentine day only,
Why not make love everyday,
Today is Valentine so start right away,
Have a best valentine partner
Today from this day,
Every day,
Happy Valentine,
Well any way
— loved, Feb 14, 2011
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
vexations10
15 years 4 months ago
I’ll take this
as an order.... thanks.
loved
15 years 4 months ago
Thank you very much
its the maiden comment of urs
which I value so much
thanks for ur visit
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