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Wild train

A wild Mc screaming shit
God's remix people equipped 
I got you feces
 rappers puzzled pieces kicked 
in love with the sweet eclipse
When I rap I gotta hold back
 Lest the crowd think it's a demon trick
Lord who am I to exist
 My computer chip overloaded thought in my brain explains why I shoot for shots empty clip and the rudest God
fort Knox
 Sunny wit
man this judas cop poor Bart
Tummy fit damn I'm lit thru the heart
pop tart
sweet as the ambulance coming
when your hearts thudding
almost dead
hope how do I cope with this blessing
some ancient message
something chasing me
tiger my heads higher taste fire
my God gave me a chance 

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Encourage

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Canada, ns

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