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Will Of A Champion
If the tide of life is rising,
will you stand to face the storm?
When you risk the fear of falling,
remember where you have come from.
You tell your heart to keep on carry on
though you never know where hope has gone.
You know the truth, you're born as champion
within your mental vision, you'll live the moment.
If it feels as if you're choking,
and despair is slowly growing,
embrace your faith, keep striving on,
Then you'll see your hopes, reborn!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
wesley snow
9 years 7 months ago
Well said...
even if no one else appreciated it.
alidzain
9 years 7 months ago
Wes
thank you for the visit and the comment.
Alid