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The Wine

My mind said no
Because of the wine
My body said go

Influence by the wine
I couldn't say no
Now I'm in a bind

My head is spinning
I can't say no
So you're winning

You scored a home run
I was out
Now We're done

 

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

14 years 1 month ago

Ian

I checked out your link and the books title and picture cover is beautiful

S

scribbler

14 years 1 month ago

Hi Barb

Next time you're up this way, drop in for a cup of wine lol...........stan