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Wisdom Where You Find It

I drove along the Coast highway today.
There, broken clouds were unable to hold
against a persistent sun.

The waves, turbulent like my thoughts,
leaving receding foam to chase
after what they are unlikely to catch.

Like the foam, I realized
I would simply have to meet the next wave
where it collides with its destination.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Sometimes, You just have to get to the sea to sort things out.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Geezer

Geezer

3 months 2 weeks ago

Yes...

the coast is often very beautiful and gives us a sense of perspective. You manage to give us a taste of what you must have felt at that moment. Nicely done, ~ Geez.
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