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Apr 04, 2025
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Wisdom Where You Find It
I drove along the Coast highway today.
There, broken clouds were unable to hold
against a persistent sun.
The waves, turbulent like my thoughts,
leaving receding foam to chase
after what they are unlikely to catch.
Like the foam, I realized
I would simply have to meet the next wave
where it collides with its destination.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Sometimes, You just have to get to the sea to sort things out.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Words.unwritten
3 months 2 weeks ago
Love this and can definitely
Love this and can definitely relate ..
Geezer
3 months 2 weeks ago
Yes...
the coast is often very beautiful and gives us a sense of perspective. You manage to give us a taste of what you must have felt at that moment. Nicely done, ~ Geez.
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