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Nov 01, 2012
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wist
the edge
strong cuts away the swath
the vestige wraiths like sails keep
I am a halo bound to earth
I feel the strain of your wings
beautiful and raised
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
12 years 11 months ago
For "A"
a true angel amongst the ordinary~
judyanne
12 years 11 months ago
short
and full of visuals and emotion
awesome - as usual
love judy
xxx
loved
12 years 11 months ago
AWESOME YES
but explain some
Esker
12 years 11 months ago
night in the drunk tank
not yet grounded although home
for the moment
this is a poem for someone very dear to me
loved
12 years 11 months ago
You meant to say all that sweet poem was about drinking
drinking what??
where with whom
answer thread bare
if to ask
Loved can dare!
Nordic cloud
12 years 11 months ago
Savour the bite that grips
Savour the bite that grips
the sails fill
the breeze cuts rainbows
round your poem.
I love to clip and fold paper,
Love to you Steven from Ann.
Its for Anna, of course, I know that.