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Witching Hour
stuffed like manicotti
diaphanous girl
a headless masquerade
her black lipstick and shivering pearls
giggle like earthquake chandeliers
festooned buttocks
curves a lyrical hell of desire
pocket eyes
dead suns
aloof
yield vacant split azure vault
a fetish horror
zoomorphic and headless
a thrilled non compos mentis
her mouth widens
like a line turning into circle
turning into a jagged city
of twining red wet mayhem
fish head stare
and toothy kisses
on red abdomen posy hook
jutting her spine for sadistic fires
she rolls her velvet thighs
wriggling
a wrench
twitch
a mad headless lunar sputnik
circumambulates spit tongue sputum
she is the hole in the sky of god
her spirit impaled upon
torrential mountain libidos
wild life park of cocks
wet fingering a basket of skulls
she nestled
her depraved tilted crown
lilting onto the stained guillotine
saying come on
i can hardly wait to get started
make me the ghastly queen
goddess of the witching hour
bone blood
and black glitter dead of night
About This Poem
Last Few Words: extreme fetish sadomasochism
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 10 months ago
As always...
A delight to read! ~Geezer.
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zebra
5 years 10 months ago
Many thanks Geezer :)
Many thanks Geezer :)
Edna Sweetlove
5 years 7 months ago
I liked the line about
I liked the line about festooned buttocks but want to know with what are they festooned?