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Kailashana2
Nov 05, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

without you (poem by Barry)

how clearly I saw myself
when you brushed a rebellion of hair
to the ranks of God
quaking the mountain on which my
heart lay
in that stranger cold
without you

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”. , I'm still writing.....

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raj

13 years 11 months ago

Dear Anna

thanks for sharing this write of Barry...it is very effective in terms of expressing the void and the craving

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 11 months ago

Dear Anna,

I agree with raj. Barry is as eloquent as ever.

always, Cat

loved

loved

13 years 11 months ago

eloquence and silence

are the two requisites
of a great poet
who has one for ever guessing ...
what did the poet say ,
rather mean,
and
you so excel

even when you so comment ...
just great so nice to see you
off and on kailash