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Kailashana2
Nov 05, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

without you (poem by Barry)

how clearly I saw myself
when you brushed a rebellion of hair
to the ranks of God
quaking the mountain on which my
heart lay
in that stranger cold
without you

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”. , I'm still writing.....

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raj

13 years 8 months ago

Dear Anna

thanks for sharing this write of Barry...it is very effective in terms of expressing the void and the craving

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 8 months ago

Dear Anna,

I agree with raj. Barry is as eloquent as ever.

always, Cat

loved

loved

13 years 8 months ago

eloquence and silence

are the two requisites
of a great poet
who has one for ever guessing ...
what did the poet say ,
rather mean,
and
you so excel

even when you so comment ...
just great so nice to see you
off and on kailash