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Mar 21, 2023
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Wonder
We often wonder what life is all about
Thinking, seeking, full of doubt
Do we seek our goals and desires
Or try to achieve what God inspires
Acting with selfish madness
We often end in virtual sadness
Always reaping pleasures with great skill
Neglecting what is in God’s will
Filling days with serious prayer
Will fill our lives with love and care
We no longer wonder what life is about
When we follow God’s planned route
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 3 months ago
The faith of others...
is not often seen to be of particular interest or importance to some. However, it should always be allowed respect. What is God? Hmmm... I think that remains to be ascertained by the devotee. Nice work, however. ~ Geezer.
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Jackweb
2 years 3 months ago
Nice job!
You achieved some good rhymes here with aa,bb.
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Clentin
2 years 3 months ago
Thank you. I am trying all
Thank you. I am trying all sorts of types. Hope to get better