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Nov 30, 2018
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In Wonderland
My heart was pounding
given choice of
paper boat or balloons.
I jumped into the boat
grabbing balloons as sails.
— raj, Nov 30, 2018
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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IRiz
7 years 6 months ago
hmmm
hmmm
interesting write
it makes me think
raj
7 years 6 months ago
thanks IRiz ..appreciate your
thanks IRiz ..appreciate your visit...good to know it made you think...i may be tweaking it up a bit...
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raj
7 years 6 months ago
thanks April for your
thanks April for your visiting this page...yes, this is about fantasy and thrill...grabbing the opportunity when it knocks on the door..
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