In Wonderland

My heart was pounding
given choice of
paper boat or balloons.
I jumped into the boat
grabbing balloons as sails.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

IRiz

6 years 7 months ago

hmmm

hmmm
interesting write
it makes me think

raj

6 years 7 months ago

thanks IRiz ..appreciate your

thanks IRiz ..appreciate your visit...good to know it made you think...i may be tweaking it up a bit...
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raj

6 years 7 months ago

thanks April for your

thanks April for your visiting this page...yes, this is about fantasy and thrill...grabbing the opportunity when it knocks on the door..
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