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raj
Mar 17, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Wonderment

Were Angels sleeping
over land of rising Sun
when tsunami struck?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 4 months ago

Raj

Raj,

an interesting question, cleverly created by way of Haiku...a Japanese form of poetry.

Very clever my friend,

Enjoyed it,

HS

R

raj

14 years 4 months ago

Dear Dan

thank you for stopping by...good to know you enjoyed it...

S

scribbler

14 years 4 months ago

Uh oh

Guess my tsunami Haiku will have to wait a day or two now lol. The angels must have wanted new company............stan

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raj

14 years 4 months ago

Dear Stan

thank you for your comment..i liked your response "the Angels must have wanted new company"....looking forward to see your haiku...

warmly..

R

raj

14 years 4 months ago

Dear Anna..

thank you for your response...