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World Building
Was having lunch with people the other day
Could not understand a word they had to say
As my mind wandered away, I started to feel
That none of these people were even real
Implanted memories from a long time ago
To turn me into someone who I do not know
I hear voices inside my head I cannot see
They are all just part of the grand conspiracy
I feel so much better when I am all alone
Living in this world, I built all on my own
Living inside of this cold, cold ice box
Held together by mental blocks
My end is near; my past; it is gone away
In this world I built, I will always stay
About This Poem
Last Few Words: When asked why I write what I do, I say, "My words are of someone who has seen love but has never experienced love, someone who has seen winners but has never been a winner, and someone who has seen success but never has achieved success."
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
Well...
I think you can cross that last one off your list. You have had some success here. Nice job! ~ Geezer.
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Depressed 1
2 years 4 months ago
Thanks
Thanks Geezer