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wounded

In for repairs :)

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 8 months ago

My dear Jayne

Is it you that's in for repair or the Poem ???
Just thought I would ask.
Take care and know we are thinking of you,
Yours Ian, and Friends

Seren

Seren

11 years 8 months ago

Ian

Definitely the poem in for repair at the moment I am not doing too shabby :) the poem was not up to my standards I will work on it and consider reposting it

love always JC xxx