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Nov 23, 2022
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WOW MY Lovely Wautumn
Bright as the red autumn leaves
they spring joy in all hearts
love and care
every minute
day
every where
my sweet sounds of happiness
they brighten my sadder days
bring energy to my life
days and every place
with them I'm happy
it is my inner feelings
Ah! a grandest space
It will be very cold
white winter all say
shall wait for warmth of spring
when on the first spring day
flowers bloom
birds shall sing songs
bring back my red autumn
with in yellow spring.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Ah, O, My Lovely Autumn
Hello, Lovedly,
Such a mixed feeling of sadness and joy. Accepting the solemn feelings autumn and winter may bring, but reflecting on the beauty, and anticipating the return of spring. That's what gets us through hard times, isn't it? Lovely poem.
Thank you!
Lav
lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
Such a beauty in yur wisdom Lav ma'am
Such a mixed feeling of sadness and joy. Accepting the solemn feelings autumn and winter may bring, but reflecting on the beauty, and anticipating the return of spring. That's what gets us through hard times, isn't it? Lovely poem.
Candlewitch
2 years 7 months ago
dearest Lovedly,
I feel a kinship with the autumn months, for the reasons our Lavender mentioned and expressed so well. soon we will be in the cruel heart of winter's frozen grasp. I will carry a bit of autumn's colors with me. thanks for this.
*much love to you, Cat
lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
autumns will come and go
seasonal changes
global warming
yet autumns will come as and when
Cats