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Feb 27, 2023
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Wraith
Yesterday
Trust was a wet fish
Nearly dead and dinner
Contorting to breathe
In a world without water
Tonight
I’m a wraith
between worlds
Seeking solace
Visage vague
Feeling familiar
Tomorrow
I’m details
Diligence due
Pacing steps left
by lesser men
Unspun yarn
rotting in the loom
About This Poem
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Comments
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Wraith
Good morning, Poet,
The sense of uncertainty of self, purpose, perhaps place in a demanding, but still lonely world - both on a personal level, and universally. Beautiful alliteration throughout. Strong title that equals your final line.
L
Abby
2 years 4 months ago
This poem feels really strong
This poem feels really strong to me. The consistent use of metaphor and personification of trust. I think, also, the language flows really nicely. And I enjoyed how each stanza was a different time frame, good idea.