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May 13, 2011
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writing poetry for lovers
youth is tough for dreamers
i write that
intending it
to be all i say
but you remember things
little ones
like
shallots are spring onions
and it leaves me
impressed
you listened
there should be
something more profound
than just outlines of myself
more to run your hands across
more lasting than
whatever 'this' is
and there again is
a reason to make you
into poetry
so 'this' is remembered
by the poet
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I hate the title lol
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: [This option has been removed]
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Nordic cloud
14 years 2 months ago
I am tempted to be unorthodox
I am tempted to be unorthodox here as a friend of someone's mother was out with her boyfriend and had eaten a large does of onions, that proved fatal when she was just about to kiss him, she let off a fart and the lover ran away.
Your message is infinitely more delicately put Chez!
LuvAnn