WURST POME EVER

This is the wurst poem ever writ
it has no rhyme, the meter's sh@ t
well maybe it has one lone rhyme
but it's hardly worth your time

I don't know what the intent is
message as clear as soda fizz
mizpelling and tipos by the duzzen
as purty as an old maid cuzzin

You can relax I'm almost finished
is there such a word as ginnished ?
go on back to having fun
this monstrosity is finally done

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Comments

Nordic cloud

14 years 8 months ago

scidding fizzibles out of ears

Was it wurst you slake my thirst,
for sudden bouts of fun,
you have just begun to turn the knob
and out it comes with buttons on;
scidding fizzibles out of ears
slicing wizicles out of some,
where's the gun, I've ginnished!

:) Ann in the clouds.
AND WHY NOT?

scribbler

14 years 8 months ago

pome

just a little thing for fun. Glad you enjoyed.......scribbler

scribbler

14 years 8 months ago

pome

I don't think any here were ever that bad lol. glad you came by..........scribbler

mand

14 years 8 months ago

Witty

You come up with some brilliant ideas Stan! and yet again - I'm pleased to say - I'm giggling and laughing, a great start to a Thursday morning!

Thanks Stan the Man

Love Mand xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

scribbler

14 years 8 months ago

pome

just a rerun from my old blog. Glad it gave you a chuckle.........stan

scribbler

14 years 8 months ago

pome

Alas , If that's all you can find wrong with this, your career as a critic is doomed LMAO. It seems that everybody has enjoyed this oldie but moldy. Thanks for suggestions but rekkon I'll leeve it ass iss..........skribblur