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Jan 27, 2013
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yes you honour me
the worlds a fast moving away
towards eternity ….
moms and pops
play hide and seek equally
in the far folds of the universe
one has yet to traverse
an outstanding poet like you
as I stand out too
but you are exquisite
what am I
you alone can say
a legend will I become like you one day,
someday
only heavens can portray
let me not my wisdom betray
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
man…
a ticket to space for me
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
one ticket to ride
You and Joe making poems out of poems sigh I think its wonderful to be inspired by other writers
I have been on many occasions
Love Jc xxx
loved
12 years 5 months ago
you are e welcome to join
as a ticket less traveler hahahaa
Geremia
12 years 5 months ago
as I stand out in the garden
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
OUTSTANDING !
loved
12 years 5 months ago
thank you Sir ..you inspire me beyond the beyond
...''''as I stand out in the garden
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
OUTSTANDING !
JOE GEREMIA
Nordic cloud
12 years 5 months ago
You took the words from my
You took the words from my mouth,
as I rolled down this page thinking I would remark
on exactly the same portion of this poem:
"as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone"
Exactly, Joe and Jayne, wonderful.
Ann.
loved
12 years 5 months ago
thank you ma'am
for your lovely comment