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Apr 06, 2014
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You are an entity!
We all are equal in the eyes of a new reader
Let's take a lesson or two
from Neopoets not too few
to express our inner desires
and set aflame
all misgivings that someone else
is better than me….
may be any
each poet has his /her own style
mostly most their time while,
expressing inner most grief
but forget that life is exceedingly brief
Live not in the solitudes of time
get up and to the music of life chime
life is really sublime,
live up to your confidence
as I do mine
Life is just a twinkle in terms of time
eternity is still far worthy to view
who is better than a poet
which is within you
You are an entity!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
emeka ozurumba
11 years 3 months ago
very inspirational
the theme appeals to me much , and i like your language of conveyance
raj
11 years 3 months ago
Thanks Loved for this post. I
Thanks Loved for this post. I know where it comes from :)
Regards,
loved
11 years 3 months ago
you are so gifted
as the vast ocean you daily oversee
also over see me
as you are the sea
Ian.T
11 years 3 months ago
Loved
A trip into extended reasoning, the eternity in your words is as life will be, did you ever think that we may never know that time of passing over to the other side.
One day you may be struggling for words and someone will come into your thoughts and say Loved it is OK, we will all be there together, but don't forget to pop by where the children are and ask Sadie for me, they will bring you to Granddad who will probably live next to the old man on the hill.
Go well young traveller and know we will all meet one day, how many sugars is it,
Yours Ian.T
loved
11 years 3 months ago
Go well young traveller and know we will all meet one day, how m
Go well young traveler and know we will all meet one day, how many sugars is it,
no limit of sugars
till words become sweet
ere if at all
at the junction of eternity we meet
but
if only
Thanks Ian for reading me...
Ian.T
11 years 3 months ago
Eating and drinking
Sadie is laughing, and saying "silly" you have no need to eat or drink you just are!!!
I just can't argue with that as they don't do that either, have a great day out there where ever you are, Yours Ian.T
loved
11 years 3 months ago
when in heaven
when in heaven
u can have a palace as big as heaven no frig is needed nothing to store you don't have to beg for more ask sadie for sure what you missed here for that there is a cure no condoms are ever needed for sure and kids galore may not be all yours so be in heaven when time comes you needn't advance your flight enjoy on earth all your plight for once you are gone even heaven is out of sight Friend am I right
Ian.T
11 years 3 months ago
Loved
In pure thought there is no wrong
In pure energy there is the universe
In perfection there is our future life
In life there is awareness of everything
Learn to use everything you have..
Yours Ian.T
loved
11 years 3 months ago
when in heaven
read my
heaven
else now
u will miss it
when
in
heaven