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Jan 19, 2011
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You are Here
I wrote songs for you
long
before we
met
their melodies
lingered
in the heart of me
echoing
through my everything
calling you
from Heaven
and
You came
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
:))) love you too honey. This
:))) love you too honey. This one came to me in the bath, fortunately it stuck around long enough to be written ;) so many poems run through my head and I'm unable to get them down (hands full with kids and nappies etc lol) but this one wanted to be remembered :) glad you like it :) and even glader it made you smile :) HUGS xxxx
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
Thank you Shirl :) glad you
Thank you Shirl :) glad you like it. It makes my day to have made two lovely ladys smile :) much love Beki xxx
Kailashana2
14 years 5 months ago
Sweet!
Sweet!
Nice to see you Beki.
I have a thought for tweaking the ending which is the heart of the poem.
You are here. The title already suggests the ending.
Anyhow, welcome back and I look forward to reading your poems.
~A
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
Hi Anna, apologies for not
Hi Anna, apologies for not responding sooner, very rude of me to post and run lol :) I quite like your suggestion but wonder if maybe I could alter the title and not the end? would still address that issue, hey ho, I'll give it some thought. Lovely to see you here :) oodles of love xxx
Victorclaude
14 years 5 months ago
Very nice! Glad I read this
Very nice! Glad I read this one.
Victor
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
Ta Victor :) glad you're glad
Ta Victor :) glad you're glad :) and you enjoyed the poem, much love Beki xxx
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
Thank you Lonnie :) I guess
Thank you Lonnie :) I guess that's what all us poets aspire to eh? so happy you found some inspiration here, much love Beki xxx
ziggy
14 years 5 months ago
hi again
hi again , good to see you about
a nice sweet write, good title ,,zigs
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
Hey Zigs, good to see you too
Hey Zigs, good to see you too, would love to be around a bit more but time and life will not allow, at the moment anyway :) glad you approve of title, I changed it after seeing Anna's comment, much love Beki xxx
Kailashana2
14 years 5 months ago
Welcome back . and the tweak
Welcome back . and the tweak you thought of works, beautifully.
~A
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
:) the tweak I thought of?! ;
:) the tweak I thought of?! ;) lol glad it worked as the title, I really didn't want to change the last line :) but could totally see what you meant in your comment, thanks Anna xxx
Kailashana2
14 years 5 months ago
nope, I was bassackwards. ;-
nope, I was bassackwards. ;-)
~A
scribbler
14 years 5 months ago
greetings
I always enjoy a poem of such simplicity and deep feeling. Very nice..........................scribbler
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
Greetings back :) happy you
Greetings back :) happy you felt it scribbler, much love Beki xxx
mand
14 years 5 months ago
Hello Faerybeki
You have a natural talent. I agree with all the above. Short but packed with lovely emotions.
Well done
Love Mand xxxxxxx
faerybeki
14 years 5 months ago
Thank you Mand :) glad you
Thank you Mand :) glad you enjoyed it, much love Beki xxx