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Mar 02, 2013
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you know...
lovely and enjoyed now,
well now,
sorry now is already over
like you say about
now,
I had a friend
long distance
he would always say..
you know....
then I would say
if I do,
then why tell me?
again he would say
you know !
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 4 months ago
Loved
You know
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
So no need to say, Yours Ian.T "U" No lol
loved
12 years 4 months ago
you know
how can I knock you on your back
you are guarding it so well
you know!
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
Does Ian say you know?
And what's with the le moineau.
Are you guys all part of a network?
Is it drugs? Paedos? Porn? Pervs?
Oh dear is there an answer to this you know poem
What do you know?
Ian.T
12 years 4 months ago
PS
We is all part of an international network of Broken Words,
Our main aim is to put them into order of lines.
Then to assemble those lines into blocks.
Then damn it we go to a place of sanctuary.
It is called Neopoet not Neopet as some would think.
Then what do we do we put them on a stream.. Rotflmao,
Yours Spuggy
loved
12 years 4 months ago
well said nice
Ian
Ian.T
12 years 4 months ago
Frenchf
You is just not in the know "U" know, if I knew that you knew then you would know, you know then we all would know lol..
Have a lovely day, we is not any of the three "P's You now know and I don't do drugs you know, Though you know I use to make rugs..
Have a lovely day out there where ever you are, yours le moineau.
Moineau
Nom anglais: Sparrow
Nom latin: Passer domesticus
Classe: Oiseaux
Ordre: Passeriformes
Famille: Passéridés
Ses ailes sont brunâtres avec des stries de couleur blanche. La queue est grise foncée. Ses joues et les côtés de son cou sont blancs. Sa tête est foncé bordée de châtain descendant le long du cou. Le plumage nuptiale, moins apparent que la plupart des autres espèces d'oiseaux est quand même présent. La tête du mâle se teint de gris. Le bec est gris noir alors que d'habitude il est brun clair. La femelle n'a pas de plumage nuptiale. This is in french so that you know what it is they call me young frenchf,
Yours Sparrow
Ross Hamilton Hill
12 years 4 months ago
I would end on the second
I would end on the second 'you know'
'blast it he was more deafer', this sea shanty dialogue is a different brand of humour and seems corny compared to what has gone before which is more subtle and clever, same goes for the deafer duffer pun.
'Brevity is the soul of wit'
loved
12 years 4 months ago
wise advice is always
welcome
and thanks taken