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Jun 14, 2011
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You so compliment me
You so compliment me
As if I were a star,
A celebrity,
A sun,
A moon
And
From this unearthly earth
You would lift me soon,
Into the weeping valleys
Of shadowed eternity,
To where we all return,
Ere human maternity,
To strive in all malefactions custody
And
To seek final solace
After all the mercilessness of humanity,
So must I too return?
From here to the far folds of eternity…
But sad tis,
We all have to parade
The sojourn alone.
You can however signal
To me,
Now perish or I grieve.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
faithmairee
14 years 1 month ago
Outstanding Loved
This is really wonderful, loved. You drew me in with your opening line and kept me interested until the very end. Great wonderful poem, my friend!
Love,
Faith
loved
14 years 1 month ago
YOU EXCEL
You excel in your vociferous way
And
Raise me from the lower strata,
Where I stay
And
Uphold my hand all through life's way
How can I,
not but for you pray,
For your happiness,
I shall still stay.
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 1 month ago
Loved
You are flying on wings of angels!
Bravisima!!
Eddie
loved
14 years 1 month ago
Cruz you continue to
Angelise me
from all angles
but i am yet to become
an ANGEL!
scribbler
14 years 1 month ago
Hi Loved
You have been taking your poetry up another notch lately in my opinion...............stan
loved
14 years 1 month ago
my thanks to you Stan
for your sweet words
...................which I cherish most
in my thoughts
.............................................you are also uppermost