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Feb 07, 2016
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You still are O! poet
You still are O! poet
one who reverberates
through the sweeping
strains of moments
and
forms ripples as chimes
in the imaginary
dying motion of times
but
time doesn't die
it only just says good bye
and
silently, unobtrusively passes by
to that luring distance
over the sun setting horizon
but
has it set really
it has risen
Albeit elsewhere
we alone in memories dwell
time cautiously does spell
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
9 years 5 months ago
BEAUTIFUL poetry, my poet
BEAUTIFUL poetry, my poet friend...
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
THANK you
salutation should suffice
today I have eaten poetic rice
and
in abundance as granted
by my masters
voice