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lovedly
lovedly
Apr 25, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

YOUR ADVICE ENDEARED

All here only render free advice I enjoy accepting
Yesterday I saw the cat jump across the fence dashed into a bucket full of water
splashed and purred all about enjoyed the laughter

Then in my back yard a squirrel
ran on the fence
which side to land
my rear tomatoes garden
or fall on the colorful leaves

then my dog came barking
she jumped up the tree

See nature smiles with ye
with glee
as laugh at small kid's pranks
yeah these pets are
like our kids

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Cloudy day dull but made all fun

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 2 months ago

Yesterday...

enjoyed all the more, because I take lovedly's advice! I find great joy in the little things that others don't even notice. While sitting in the parking lot, waiting for my wife; [I came out to move the car closer to the door] and when I parked again, I saw a little girl with pale blonde hair, sitting in a shopping cart, pushed by her father toward the store, a light breeze blew her curly hair and her eyes were so big and blue! She had a pink shirt and white shorts on. Her face glowed with excitement and she watched her father push the cart with such intensity, that I immediately thought that is her hero! Things like that are priceless!
Thank you lovedly for reminding me of those moments. ~ Geez.
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