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loved
loved
Mar 09, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Your eyes! ed

The theme today is eyes
I always have known
that beauty lies,
in the beholders’ eyes
as does love
and that is no lies!

so as the theme today
appears to be
all about lovely eyes

I wish somehow
you do too see,
the beauty in my poetry
if they do lie
do tell me,why

for I know all of us love
our very eyes
and love,
lies within ones loving eyes

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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loved

loved

11 years 4 months ago

at times one has to be

outstanding
and
being one such a one
as you can see
most recognize brotherly

you do so Jess dearly
as your equally
no not silly or stupid
but brotherly

R

raj

11 years 4 months ago

Loved

I feel you could have done away with the "between the thighs" lines and refine your poem to be in sync with the title..

Regards,

Esker

Esker

11 years 4 months ago

the most powerful of gaze burns like a blaze

melting walls of steely defence
the hazel...aqua...and green...
and the ice between the valleys
like glacial purity
trickles into the stream
the rivers of life
that spawn
and bring peace
to the lonesome
and the lovers to
love

thank you

loved

loved

11 years 4 months ago

what lovely words

inscribed upon my field,
to your exquisite poetry
Loved must yield

so be it

from Dearest Esker
Neopoets
enchanting poet

loved

loved

11 years 4 months ago

i love ur crap

as you are the one
who shall wrap
when all my works are found
by others
excepting u
as not that crap

if one is a sadist
what can any one do
except pray for a soul
like u

ur spite is manure for me
I shall continue to be cherished by all
except ye
as a Christmas tree
hopefully

Esker

Esker

11 years 4 months ago

prayers work..

who would think that turds bring flowers and plants that we humans
thrive on......energy....spring is coming here...i wait for the flowers...
the blossoms are starting to stir here in our frozen world....water is
trickling for its awakening....the good old polar vortex was and is beautiful..
i feel run over a few timrs toay but must walk and gether sustgenanc
maybe i will see faces and things in my ardous travel that will spring forth a \
poem or two...

thank you..