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Apr 22, 2025
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Your Smile, the Third Star
In my cup, three
Stars have fallen:
My fellow's verse,
A wisdom I've just learnt,
And your smile.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 months ago
Dearest Rula,
This is wonderful! What lovely thoughts you have!
love, Candle
Rula
2 months ago
Dearest Candle
I think it's fair to say that most of my "lovely" thoughts are the inspiration of some wonderful friends alike you
It's a haven for me and my thoughts.
Much appreciate it!
Candlewitch
2 months ago
many smiles :) :) :)
many smiles :) :) :)
much love, Candle
Ruby Lord
2 months ago
Hi Rula, your poem is
Hi Rula, your poem is luminous and fleeting. Its restraint suits it perfectly. Ruby xx
Rula
2 months ago
Hello Ruby
So glad to know that this short poem is worthy to visit.
Your comment is highly appreciated as ever.
Thank you so much!
Frederick Kesner
2 months ago
Makes me feel like I’m
Makes me feel like I’m reading Kahlil Gibran again. Such exquisite beauty and meaning wedded in brief lines. Nothing overstated, nothing wasted; everything as it should be. :)
Candlewitch
2 months ago
c b!
I should have guessed!!!
you are K. Gibran fan, too!
Frederick Kesner
1 month 4 weeks ago
Cat, I was thinking no one
Cat, I was thinking no one would really catch on but it does take one to know one! It’s quite the blessing to have been given the benefit of a variety of poetic expressions. Grateful :)