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Aug 28, 2022
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your time blows in the wind
spread your hands
like you own the skies. speak like thunder and
let the rain fall. act the script.
own the world; even hakuna matata happened
when all animals bowed to simba.
your's is coming.
take the step helon habila took on plateau plains
of purple hibiscus: chimamanda's silver lining
and aprons round your waist
and big one on israel adesanya's shoulder.
all will wait till your time comes. for now
it blows in the winds. it will come.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is a motivational poem to encourage everyone to keep the dream alive. To keep pushing and learn from others' success stories.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Warrior Princess
2 years 10 months ago
Very profound piece. Just
Very profound piece. Just some suggestions, beginning with all your stanzas capitalize the first letter. Capitalize each word in the title. Where you end with a full stop capitalize the next letter. Overall a heroic piece for people to find the courage within themselves and willed it into themselves.
Ifeanyichukwu …
2 years 10 months ago
Thank you Warrior Princess
Thank you Warrior Princess for checking in on my poem. Well, this is an attempt on style different from the norm. Glad the message resonated with you.
Geezer
2 years 10 months ago
Absolutely...
A great message, that resonates with everyone. No matter how small or large the task, keep the faith! ~ Geezer.
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Ifeanyichukwu …
2 years 10 months ago
Thanks Geezer. Appreciate
Thanks Geezer. Appreciate your comments. Life happens. We get up and keep building.