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Aug 09, 2013
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Your wrong
Your wrong
I'll come back strong
I've made mistakes
My heart really aches
I want to make one thing clear
My life is a premier
No matter what you say or do
I'm no longer blue
You didn't take a look inside
If you did you'll be on a good ride
I'm writing this song
To tell you, you're wrong
I can handle it
I'm not a misfit
Some reason I can't change your mind
I'm just one of a kind
I've been there along time
You act like I've done a crime
You wouldn't give me a chance
To do a last dance
I don't know what to say
Maybe I ought to take the highway
To find a new path
To end this wrath
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hawkeye
12 years 2 months ago
This poem is about feelings about being treated
This poem is about my feelings about being treated at work. Mainly my feelings!