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Unveiling Time

Posted Feb 12, 2010 · 26 lines · 3 critiques

Wise men wrote with rooted past
Of knowledge keen that time won’t last

An age shall pass but leave its scars
Of fortunes told held by the stars

The course is set, I’ve placed my bid
Align thy piece within its grid

To each his own I’ve found my place
Thus watch me move into this space

Knights have valor it’s quite well known
While kings have queens beside their throne

Get what you can while you still have time
To soon will end this riddled rhyme

The end of days unveils the truth
Of what was missed within our youth

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And when you gaze upon your star
The light is key, it’s who you are

Father time he harkens near
Forget me not a wolf was here

Words speak loud without much proof
Yet who’d have guessed that it’s the truth

Of what I speak just made up stories
Yet in too deep you’ll see my glories

Champs will conquer this life’s charade
That duality’s role seeks to evade

Life in white or life in black
Simplicity works where colors lack

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"I really enjoyed your words. Much knowledge in them. All in sync. Well written. Love Lyz. XX"
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"Very nicely done. Your rhythm and rhyme were right on. A nice read indeed. Sue"
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"Great thats all I got to say now. Magics02"
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