bunnymug

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are you slipping, my dear?

Posted Nov 20, 2009 · 16 lines · 3 critiques

quiet chants and pretty words you took them from me

given from a full and tender heart

will they know they’re not yours?

why snatch my small whimpers

re-packaged as neon

shattered windows of memory

are the shards of my soul

my meaning lost and subdued

i rail at the cut cost creations

you feed your adoring fans

(plastic echoes of fragile perfection)

how dare you, cold heart

when you’ve so much of your own

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May 2012
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Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
24 Thu

Received a critique
on impulse from @Esker
"the liquid distortion sometimes I used to drink hating what the depression did couldnt make it out of the rut the hold that helplessness had on me not willing to admit its much more then just me you write of this state…"
23 Wed

Received a critique
on commute from @Esker
"well worth it"
23 Wed

Received a critique
on commute from @Esker
"one year five months later "swish swish" for me its a joy reading it again but thats me I Love POetry especially this poets work Esker~"
November 2009
20 Fri

Posted a poem
are you slipping, my dear?
"quiet chants and pretty words you took them from me"
Open thread 16 lines
October 2009
22 Thu

Posted a poem
surrender
"set him free, insidious demons"
Open thread 27 lines
August 2009
31 Mon

Posted a poem
impulse
"i throw myself into limpid waters"
Open thread 26 lines
February 2009
04 Wed

First critique offered
on "climb the dark" by @orgami
January 2009
22 Thu

First publication
commute
22 Thu

Most-discussed work
commute

10 critiques to date.