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Feb 15, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
SunKu 4 Workshop
Our love
Like winter’s
Dead twiggy trees
Two ships
In the night
Missed each other
The search
For our love
Halted long ago
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
I love your poem
I was thinking about how many stanzas are good for Sunku. Three felt somehow the best.
By writing longer stream you add a dreamy, contemplating touch to the form.
It is a free form and I respect your choice.
I like the way you increase the size of the gap between your characters
Thank you for sharing your poem
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
Three stanzas good
When I write I get carried away when it’s a new form.