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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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SunKu 4 Workshop

Our love
Like winter’s
Dead twiggy trees

Two ships
In the night
Missed each other

The search
For our love
Halted long ago

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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IRiz

IRiz

7 years 4 months ago

I love your poem

I was thinking about how many stanzas are good for Sunku. Three felt somehow the best.
By writing longer stream you add a dreamy, contemplating touch to the form.
It is a free form and I respect your choice.
I like the way you increase the size of the gap between your characters
Thank you for sharing your poem