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Skumpfsklub
Apr 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Like a trumpet farting merrily

 

 

Like a trumpet farting merrily

Rolling thought around in circular

Rhythm as a kind of skeleton

Here I stand in auto-parody

Wonder if the girl whose lingerie

Shows a taste for lacy arrogance

Has a thing for older gentlemen

Song before I take the microphone


— Skumpfsklub, Apr 13, 2008
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purplemoondoll

18 years 2 months ago

I liked this - its silly I

I liked this - its silly I guess, but I like the irony and message behind it - nice work. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 2 months ago

Still LMAO

at the farting trumpet. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 11 months ago

We need more flatulent poetry

and more often. Let this be taken as a plea to each of the truly great poets here to produce at least one poem dedicated to 'speaking through the silk,' or 'ripping trousers with the ghost of remembered legumes.' This single oblique reference is hardly adequate reverence to the Nether Voice. Perry

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