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Apr 11, 2009
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Degredation
Love burns bright with caution and care –It gives me wings that cut the airYet warning bells ring so ominously there
Our fire needs fuel
but all too soon,
all we have left
are flaws that wound
And now we don't sing
such melodious tunes
Darkness makes bereft - it pervades my thoughtsand mars your words; A watching pairof little black birds The seeds of doubthave taken hold – Their roots force cracksand we grow cold.
Our fire needs fuel
but all too soon,
all we have left
are flaws that wound
And now we don't sing
such melodious tunes
Darkness makes bereft - it pervades my thoughtsand mars your words; A watching pairof little black birds The seeds of doubthave taken hold – Their roots force cracksand we grow cold.
— Giuliana Isabella, Apr 11, 2009
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Craig Norris
17 years 2 months ago
tunes melodious
Giuliana Isabella
17 years 2 months ago
Thank you
Seren
17 years 2 months ago
I liked
Craig Norris
17 years 2 months ago
Yep
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