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Apr 16, 2009
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The Existence of That Which You Cannot Touch
Elements,
they masquerade as matter
And the mind
parades like it knows fact.
My heartbeat,
the metronome of disaster
Makes up for
what the flesh tones lack.
As touch must
make up for lack of texture.
To taste feels
better when eyes close.
As gold does
somehow lose its luster.
As poets
are forgotten in the prose.
'Cause all fades-
like midday's sun above a cloud.
And concrete
Is a word just like abstract
this love will
be covered with a mourner's shroud.
as words recede
I'm lost in want of tact.
— sha_onarainyday, Apr 16, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
I dove into the stream …
sha_onarainyday
17 years 1 month ago
thanks for the lovely
meic
17 years 1 month ago
I liked this a lot: it is
bjp
17 years 1 month ago
Dear Sha,
whitetea
17 years ago
im not the best at leaving
Craig Norris
17 years ago
as poets are forgotten in the prose
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