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Apr 27, 2009
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things were okay / til
things were okay
til she said he said
yadda yadda yadda
and HE said he said
yadda yadda yadda
then he said SHE said
yadda yadda yadda
and SHE said she said
yadda yadda yadda
but if she DID say
yadda yadda yadda
what she MEANT was
yadda yadda yadda
then he said if he DID say
yadda yadda yadda
all HE meant was
yadda yadda yadda
then things were okay
and i was going to say
yadda yadda yadda
but i won't
til she said he said
yadda yadda yadda
and HE said he said
yadda yadda yadda
then he said SHE said
yadda yadda yadda
and SHE said she said
yadda yadda yadda
but if she DID say
yadda yadda yadda
what she MEANT was
yadda yadda yadda
then he said if he DID say
yadda yadda yadda
all HE meant was
yadda yadda yadda
then things were okay
and i was going to say
yadda yadda yadda
but i won't
— Rob Graber, Apr 27, 2009
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Critiques
Craig Norris
17 years 1 month ago
there's alot of that goin' round.
Rob Graber
17 years 1 month ago
And what goes around...
odiumscurse
16 years 10 months ago
Clever
Rob Graber
16 years 10 months ago
Great!
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