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Jun 17, 2009
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Cluttered
Wet weather, wet weather
out it comes from the sky above
flooding the streets
of a city so sweet
his room is so tight
so cluttered galore
made up of earth hues
it's asking for more
his place is so homey
not like my little bore
oh where do the sheep sleep
their rugs on the floor
the carpets stained
the kitchens strange
cords galore
and books for all
but with new carpet
the space is a thrill
let's celebrate
and hope there's no spill
out it comes from the sky above
flooding the streets
of a city so sweet
his room is so tight
so cluttered galore
made up of earth hues
it's asking for more
his place is so homey
not like my little bore
oh where do the sheep sleep
their rugs on the floor
the carpets stained
the kitchens strange
cords galore
and books for all
but with new carpet
the space is a thrill
let's celebrate
and hope there's no spill
— Fleur MacDonald, Jun 17, 2009
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Craig Norris
16 years 12 months ago
well that's a chuckle
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 12 months ago
Art students are
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