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sweet solace

These days, as the poetry of you
is dancing in a clearing,
and light flickers on the tree trunks
you glide through shadows into bright,
to warm me more
than any fire could.

Words release a symphony,
this joy tumbling from my lips
as laughter,
while sands get washed anew
by times and tides of dreaming,
so these first colours on the canvas
of an easel
set sweet solace
to my missing you.

— Craig Norris, Jun 26, 2009

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 11 months ago

sweet solace

Craig me boy! You did good! No make that GREAT! Your woods do indeed "tumble from your lips" and straight into others' hearts! Thank you for this little gem! Boni
CN

Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

thanks Boni

I rushed this a little and shouldn't have, so thanks for your kind words, I think perhaps the poem is more worthy of them now. Love. Craig
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

Oh Craig, this made me ache,

Oh Craig, this made me ache, what ever you did, (I haven't looked at your editing but presume from your comment above that you've done some) it is indeed worthy. Much love b xx
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

:)

Why, thank you Craig, us poets are of the same heart don't you think? more love b x
CN

Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

I am pleased

like a school boy when he gets a higher mark Thanks Kels, Love. Craig

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