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Craig Norris
Oct 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

you

It is a beautiful thought
you and I
making a life together.

You,
who have grown into my being,
your presence
so deep, so light.

I cannot tell where you begin
or where I end,
there are no signal flags
nor murmerings, no discontent.

No,
just this warmth,
just this knowledge
of you.
— Craig Norris, Oct 05, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Lovely poem of love. And

Lovely poem of love. And the lady is a...tramp? Just kiddin' Been wondering where you were as of late, apparently you have been....busy making love...ahhhh so. ~A
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Craig Norris

16 years 8 months ago

and I do love

it, the way that apparently incongruent elements combine, and that is a good song. Love your new photo, glad you like this little sweet number. Craig
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

so very sweet...women just love poetic men, there is something so special about them... like a third eye, or an extra sense. They just see and feel so much more. Always, Cat
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Craig Norris

16 years 8 months ago

an extra sense

now that could be interesting, touch sight scent sound taste and poetry, maybe if we all took the time to look more of us would find it. Thanks for the kind words Cat, glad you enjoyed this. Craig
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Craig Norris

16 years 8 months ago

I really appreciate

your comments and love that you have used these words gentle and delightful, they are good words, thankyou. Craig

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